Tuesday, April 15, 2008
Journey - Part IV
Kusuma was not a beautiful one for sure. But there was something attractive about her.She was 5ft. 6 inches tall and was dusky. Her features were very bold in the sense that she had big eyes, broad smile and a big nose. She flaunted her long curly hair in a pony tail which actually looked good on her. She had just put on weight at the right places and had felt nice when one of her college boys said she was voluptuous. Her innate sense of dressing had made her more desirable to men. She was original and creative in her dressing , yet very simple. Her over all personality exuded a lot of charm and simplicity.
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hi Rachna....liked the story and waiting for the continuation....compile more if possible some illustrations...it will make ur readers get attracted to the story. Also try writing to good housekeeping magazine or woman's era. they have short stories page. You can really do something about it.
Its nice biography, probably even Kusuma would not have been able narrate it this good .
What Happens Next???
Waiting!!!!!!!
hey good start.....
keep goin....
and i jus felt the story is movin a little fast.....
Good....
But it takes time to become the master storyteller that I am!!!
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